Hello everyone!! I´m here again! do you want to hear my story??
well, this one is about a lesson in my book. Hope you like it!! :3
Once upon a time a twenty two years old boy. He was from a poor country. He had a dream, to change the way he had been living. So he decided to go abroad. And he did it!
When he arrived the new place, he started to write letters to home.
He wrote four letters for his family, in every single letter, he described what was happening to him. At the beginnig he told them that he was living in a hostel with other ten guys, and also he had to pay the journey´s depth, furthermore he met a man who got a job for him, it was carrying boxes in the market at night
All the things started to go better. He found a new flat where he lived with two friends too. Although the new flat was smaller he felt comfortable like home. And a couple of weeks later he got a new job in a restaurant where he used to go to write the letters. While he was living abroad, he had got new and pretty good experiences with people. He met good friends and they created a football team. So, the practice got him a lot of experience. One day he wrote them, that a talent scout found him, the man was amazed when the boy played.
The final of this story is that the guy was very lucky, however he worked very hard to get everything he wanted.
Hi ! ;)
ResponderEliminarI read your description about letters home, and i could find three spelling mistakes, the first one you wrote at the beginning changue instead of change,
the second one you wrote the guy wrote four letter, instead of letters, but I think it was just a finger mistake :P
and the third, you wrote "it was carring" instead of carrying.
;)
Yeah! Sure finger mistakes! Thank you!! :)
Eliminar